原題回放：
今年全國新課標I卷高考英語作文的題目為：假定你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們過重陽節(jié)(the Double Ninth Festival)，請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀請她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：
1、出發(fā)及返回時間
2、活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等
點評：2015年全國新課標II卷高考英語作文題目是我們在之前的預(yù)測活動中提到過的“邀請信”“告知信”等應(yīng)用文題目，在這一系列中，需要考生們掌握“建議”、“請求”、“感謝”等功能性語句。書信體作文用到我們提到過的“書信三段論”，需要注意的是中間過渡段的用詞以及避免不必要的語法錯誤。
根據(jù)題目要求以及我們上面提到的注意點，列出提綱：
第一段：問候+輝式自我介紹+輝式寫信背景(去敬老院)+輝式寫信目的(邀請同去)
第二段：主題句+輝式拓展句1(出發(fā)及返回時間)+輝式拓展句2(活動，such as……)
第三段：我希望(你也能去)。我相信(你會喜歡這個活動)。感謝你(讀我的信)。請回信(告訴我你的決定)。
【范文】
Dear Lucy,
How are youdoing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school.Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to helpthe old there and enrich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I wouldlike to invite you to come with us。
Here are somedetails about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities suchas making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not onlymeaningful but also interesting。
Hopefully, youwould like the plan and join us. I have the confidencethat we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I amlooking forward to your reply and your decision。
Best wishes,
Yours,
LiHua
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